Brown Eyed Girl

hey, Well i liked it, the rhyme i thought was clever and I imagine very hard to do. The pace I loved, i could feel it becoming more and more ...

Hey, Great poem. It's short and to the point and that makes it very appealing to me. Maybe another verse would just top it off nicely maybe a contrast to ...

hey I'm Brown Eyed Girl, I'm soooooo happy I found this poem, i absolutely love it! Somethings I struggle to put into words what I really think you like been ...

Hey, cool user name by the way! LUV THIS POEM! great, great, great idea 4 a poem and I'm just slightly envious u thought of it first! =] But i ...

Hey, I like the idea in this poem it's cool and I totally get what your trying to say. Maybe bit more varied vocab and some good imagery and you've ...

Hey, I really like this piece I couldn't stop reading it! I came across you randomly but I'm so glad I did. I thought your writing is so realistic and ...